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发表于 2010-5-25 10:49 | 显示全部楼层
文采极佳 绝对欣赏

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[LV.2]偶尔看看I

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发表于 2010-5-25 16:51 | 显示全部楼层
填得好,申请加精

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 楼主| 发表于 2010-5-25 18:24 | 显示全部楼层
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原帖由 <I>tonehe</I> 于 2010-5-25 16:51 发表 <A href=\"http://www.yinhuabbs.cn/forum.php?mod=redirect&goto=findpost&amp;pid=721671&amp;ptid=52151\" target=_blank><IMG border=0 alt=\"\" src=\"static/image/common/back.gif\"></A> 填得好,申请加精
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<P>呵呵,嗯,好! </P>

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[LV.Master]伴坛终老

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发表于 2010-5-25 21:57 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏了好几遍,这两个词牌的词都填写得很棒,赞一个。

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发表于 2010-5-26 02:33 | 显示全部楼层
文笔很美, 欣赏了

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[LV.7]常住居民III

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发表于 2010-6-1 17:10 | 显示全部楼层
<>词意境美,句流畅!但是有出律之处,俺没有时间,琴儿才女自己对照检查一下~~祝好!</P>
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