萧琴儿 发表于 2010-5-25 08:48

蝶恋花（原创）

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[ 本帖最后由 萧琴儿 于 2010-5-25 09:02 编辑 ]

楚汐 发表于 2010-5-25 10:49

文采极佳 绝对欣赏

tonehe 发表于 2010-5-25 16:51

填得好，申请加精

萧琴儿 发表于 2010-5-25 18:24

<P>原帖由 <I>tonehe</I> 于 2010-5-25 16:51 发表 <A href=\"http://www.yinhuabbs.cn/forum.php?mod=redirect&goto=findpost&amp;pid=721671&amp;ptid=52151\" target=_blank><IMG border=0 alt=\"\" src=\"static/image/common/back.gif\"></A> 填得好，申请加精 </P>
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<P>呵呵，嗯，好！ </P>

大鹏 发表于 2010-5-25 21:57

欣赏了好几遍，这两个词牌的词都填写得很棒，赞一个。

806429953 发表于 2010-5-26 02:33

文笔很美, 欣赏了

三笑 发表于 2010-6-1 17:10

<P>词意境美，句流畅！但是有出律之处，俺没有时间，琴儿才女自己对照检查一下~~祝好！</P>
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