春天的童话 发表于 2010-2-19 11:10

（原创）雪花

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傲雪纷飞 发表于 2010-2-19 11:26

写的这么有意境，很感染人的作品。问好春天的童话，新春快乐~

萧幕尘 发表于 2010-2-19 16:41

看看，瞧瞧。。祝朋友新春愉快。。

欧阳晓岚 发表于 2010-2-19 18:23

很有意境！

退出江湖 发表于 2010-2-19 18:32

意境很美，一种柔柔的美！

三笑 发表于 2010-2-19 18:49

问好童话~~又看到你的新作很开心。童话的诗有种清纯、馨香的美，欣赏了~~

春天的童话 发表于 2010-2-19 21:16

谢谢楼上各位的欣赏，新春快乐！

云端漫步 发表于 2010-2-19 21:29

雪花诗写的有感染力，舒卷自如地写出心灵的真实状态，雪花诗既吸收了诗表现主观情绪,又如实描述心灵状态和思维来完成情感的表达，诗和文很渗透。
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