凤舞九天 发表于 2022-10-30 13:23

我的歌声里-----《大氿歌》

<p style="margin: 0pt;"><font size="3"><strong><font color="dimgray"><span style='font-family: 宋体; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-ascii-font-family: Calibri; mso-hansi-font-family: Calibri; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; mso-font-kerning: 1.0000pt;'><font face="宋体"><br></font></span></font></strong></font></p><p style="margin: 0pt;"><font size="3"><strong><font color="dimgray"><font face="宋体">这首歌是巧克力推荐的,演唱者是祖娅纳惜。听了一遍之后,给我的感觉,这是一个不太好完成的作业。说实话,相比巧克力推荐的其他歌,我对这首歌的兴趣并不如何。论旋律,称不上优美,配器并不如何丰富,歌者是略带嘶哑的女声,唱腔似通俗似民族又带有戏曲韵味。唯一让能我些许有点儿感兴趣的,就是歌词里全是典故,很有文化的说。头一句就是:</font><font face="宋体">土生木酿水中火金樽</font><font face="宋体">玉液</font><font face="宋体">......完美的把酒中蕴含的五行属性描述了出来,可不就是个小乾坤么!</font></font></strong></font></p><p style="margin: 0pt;"><span style='background: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-family: 宋体; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 0.0000pt; mso-shading: rgb(255, 255, 255);'><font color="dimgray" face="宋体" size="3"><strong>可试唱过一遍之后,我愈发觉得这歌没法唱:调不高但爆音率高,旋律平但曲折多。有很多部分带有明显戏腔倾向,又不完全一样。原唱虽然嗓音浑厚,但毕竟是女声,拔多高的调都是浑然自如,男声可就别扭了。试了几次,完全不得要领,只好放下。过几天再唱,更找不到感觉,只好再放下。</strong></font></span></p><p style="margin: 0pt;"><span style='background: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-family: 宋体; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 0.0000pt; mso-shading: rgb(255, 255, 255);'><font color="dimgray" face="宋体" size="3"><strong>不得不放下之后,心里像埋了一颗钉子,久久不能释怀。琢磨着这歌也许还有其他版本,果然就发现了戴荃版本,全篇都是用戏腔演绎的,试唱之下,感觉顺畅多了。</strong></font></span></p><p style="margin: 0pt;"><span style='background: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-family: 宋体; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 0.0000pt; mso-shading: rgb(255, 255, 255);'><font color="dimgray" face="宋体" size="3"><strong>整体上是顺畅了,但是细节我始终不能满意,且越唱越觉得这么唱寡淡无味。要说歌曲中加入一两句戏腔,通常会给人耳目一新的感觉,但通篇用戏腔唱下来,我自知水平有限,这个咱不专业啊!</strong></font></span></p><p style="margin: 0pt;"><span style='background: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-family: 宋体; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 0.0000pt; mso-shading: rgb(255, 255, 255);'><font color="dimgray" face="宋体" size="3"><strong>于是这首歌又被束之高阁。但心里始终忘不掉,头顶上仿佛乌云不散。大概是唱的次数太多(其中有一句,我一次就练了一个多小时),一有闲暇,嘴里就忍不住哼唱。凭我的戏腔水平,实在难以唱好这首歌,压抑多日,终于忍耐不住,重新鼓起勇气,要再次挑战祖娅纳惜的版本。</strong></font></span></p><p style="margin: 0pt;"><span style='background: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-family: 宋体; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 0.0000pt; mso-shading: rgb(255, 255, 255);'><font color="dimgray" face="宋体" size="3"><strong>这次开唱,可谓全凭一时刚勇,呐喊着完成了一唱。一气呵成之后,声嘶力竭,实在没有勇气重来一遍。</strong></font></span></p><p style="margin: 0pt;"><span style='background: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-family: 宋体; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 0.0000pt; mso-shading: rgb(255, 255, 255);'><font color="dimgray" face="宋体" size="3"><strong>算了,唱歌有时也如人生一样,真到唱的时候,往往之前的无数次练习都只是铺垫,想要重来一遍都未必有机会。就当满足了自己一次,好坏就是他了。</strong></font></span></p><p style="margin: 0pt;"><span style='background: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-family: 宋体; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 0.0000pt; mso-shading: rgb(255, 255, 255);'><font color="dimgray" face="宋体" size="3"><strong>有缘再见吧。</strong></font></span></p><p style="margin: 0pt;"><span style='background: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-family: 宋体; mso-spacerun: "yes"; mso-font-kerning: 0.0000pt; mso-shading: rgb(255, 255, 255);'><font color="dimgray" face="宋体" size="3"><strong>附网上抄来的歌词解析,与君共赏。</strong></font></span></p><p style="background: rgb(255, 255, 255); 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蓝魔 发表于 2022-10-30 23:06

欣赏一下,谢谢。

扎西才让 发表于 2022-10-31 21:33

给小凤加颗钻,,不仅仅因为这些字,,还因为这倾情一唱。。。

扎西才让 发表于 2022-10-31 21:34

听声音   酣畅淋漓真是过瘾,,再看文字    让歌曲的厚度顿时暴增。。

扎西才让 发表于 2022-10-31 21:35

这歌之前只觉得挺好听   还真不晓得这许多。。

扎西才让 发表于 2022-10-31 21:36

感觉你唱完之后一定是神清气爽的那种舒泰。。。我听的都觉得特过瘾呢。。

扎西才让 发表于 2022-10-31 21:41

我赶紧去翻唱版再听听~~

凤舞九天 发表于 2022-11-1 12:07

蓝魔 发表于 2022-10-30 23:06
欣赏一下,谢谢。

谢谢蓝魔 来访!{:1_1:}

凤舞九天 发表于 2022-11-1 12:08

扎西才让 发表于 2022-10-31 21:33
给小凤加颗钻,,不仅仅因为这些字,,还因为这倾情一唱。。。

好歹又完成一个作业;P

凤舞九天 发表于 2022-11-1 12:09

扎西才让 发表于 2022-10-31 21:34
听声音   酣畅淋漓真是过瘾,,再看文字    让歌曲的厚度顿时暴增。。

感觉挑战一首歌曲也跟完成一项工程似的,一点一点的啃,最终凑成个成品;P
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