【临屏点评众诗友诗词小集】（二）
<span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">1.【排律•观世界杯】 文/雕刻西风</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">五洲变换风雷色，脚下于今论至尊。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">出鞘单刀冷锋绝，脱身敌阵重兵屯。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">万声疾鼓纵奔马，一道圆弧遽破门。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">爱丽舍前欢笑处，方尖碑外寂寥痕。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">绿茵长在英雄老，酒气虽消歌哭存。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">莫怪深宵犹不寐，人生看得几晨昏。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【临屏浅析】文/三笑</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;"> 俺不懂足球，只看排律的写作章法。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;"> 首联落笔就点题了，观世界杯风云变幻，至尊论足功！中间4联对仗工稳，且白脚处3声和4声字交替变换，节奏也是2/2/1与2/1/2变换，内容有足球赛的专业术语，怎样进球，怎样射门，有赢家，有输家，有笑，有哭，有感叹，不懂足球貌似这样结句转的好，莫怪深宵犹不寐，人生看得几晨昏。毕竟4年才一次，理解！西风的排律写的很用心！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">2.【踏莎行•佳人来电】 文/新难得糊涂</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">暗里屏惊，耳边人笑。立时旧绪心头绕。玉觥转处弄莺声，腮红一抹娇多少。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">迅景如飞，生涯难料。几番风雨榴花老。长宵把盏共清茶，苦甘只说寻常好。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【临屏浅析】文/三笑</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;"> 暗里屏惊，耳边人笑。——落笔破题。立时旧绪心头绕。玉觥转处弄莺声，腮红一抹娇多少。接佳人电话引起的美好回忆。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;"> 迅景如飞，生涯难料。——承上，转无奈。几番风雨榴花老。长宵把盏共清茶，苦甘只说寻常好。平淡才是真。看似一个平常的来电，却道出了生活的艰辛与无奈，且行且珍惜。祝福！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">3.【翻赋《诗经》意之菀柳】五律 文/浮萍一梦</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【诗经·小雅·菀柳⑴】</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">有菀者柳，不尚息焉⑵。上帝甚蹈⑶，无自昵焉⑷。俾予靖之⑸，后予极焉⑹。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">有菀者柳，不尚愒焉⑺。上帝甚蹈，无自瘵焉⑻。俾予靖之，后予迈焉⑼。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">有鸟高飞，亦傅于天⑽。彼人之心，于何其臻。曷予靖之⑾，居以凶矜⑿？</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">词句注释：</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">⑴菀（yù）：树木茂盛。⑵尚：庶几。⑶蹈：动，变化无常。⑷昵（nì）：亲近。⑸俾（bǐ）：使。靖：谋。⑹极：同“殛（jí）”，惩罚。⑺愒（qì）：休息。⑻瘵（zhài）：病。⑼迈：行，指放逐。⑽傅：至。⑾曷（hé）：为什么。⑿矜（jīn）：危。 </span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">白话译文：</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">一株柳树很茂盛，不要依傍去休息。上帝心思反覆多，不要和他太亲密。当初让我谋国政，而后受罚遭排挤。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">一株柳树很茂盛，不要依傍寻阴凉。上帝心思反覆多，不要自己找祸殃。当初让我谋国政，如今放逐到远方。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">鸟儿即使飞得高，还要依附在青天。那人心狠不可测，走到何处是极限？为何要我谋国政，反又突兀遭凶险？</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【五律】</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">菀菀路边柳，莫寻荫下凉。国王行暴虐，臣子感忧伤。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">看鸟翔碧宇，思君**疆。邀吾谋国事，何故反遭殃？</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【临屏浅析】文/三笑</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;"> 【诗经·小雅·菀柳】没读过，解析很详细，读了两遍，有收获！一梦用五律来缓缓道来，读之明了，且起到了警示作用。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">菀菀路边柳，莫寻荫下凉. ——首联：暗把变化无常的上帝比作是茂盛的柳树，告诫人们不要去依傍休息或乘凉。如果不看原文，那么就给读者留下了一个悬念，为什么自古以来都说的一句俗语：大树底下好乘凉，却告诫人们莫寻荫下凉呢？俺觉得这里起到了引人入胜的目的。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">国王行暴虐，臣子感忧伤。 ——颔联直接就给了读者答案。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">看鸟翔碧宇，思君**疆。 ——颈联承接颔联用鸟儿高飞，要依附蓝天的自然现象来说明自己要发展依附的是变化无常的国王，有无奈之感。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">邀吾谋国事，何故反遭殃? ——尾联转结用问句，看似主人公自己很迷茫的样子，实质令读者思考！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">律诗要讲究写作章法，俺读律诗先看整体，再看中间二个对仗联，以俺暂时掌握的律诗知识，分析一下一梦姐姐这首五律的中间二联：</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">国王/行/暴虐，臣子/感/忧伤。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">看鸟/翔/碧宇，思君/无/界疆。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">先看节奏，都是2/1/2了，要是其中有一联用2/2/1变化一下更好。五律中间二联第一个字“国/臣,看/思”，颔联名词，颈联动词，有变化，很好！两个白脚处的“虐、宇”一个4声，一个3声，这样有了变化，读起来抑扬顿挫，非常好！再看颔联对仗工，颈联对仗一般要求严谨，碧宇/界疆感觉算宽对，工稳了更好。都是个建，仅供姐姐参考！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">4.【七律•秦楼梦】文/望君南浦</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">寂寞江湖二十春，剑悬寒壁已蒙尘。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">难浇块垒凭谁解，易感衷肠且自论。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">玉笛愁吹心底事，秦楼喜遇梦中人。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">春风微拂桃花面，月下相倾碧玉樽。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【临屏浅析】文/三笑</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;"> 认识诗弟，感觉这是第一首摆脱了伤感的诗境律诗。章法严谨，对仗工稳，起承转合浑然天成！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">寂寞江湖二十春，剑悬寒壁已蒙尘。——首联交代了隐逸江湖二十载，寂寞，剑悬寒壁，蒙尘，感觉是这期间“也无风雨也无晴”。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">难浇块垒凭谁解，易感衷肠且自论。——颔联承接隐逸“凭谁解，且自论”倍感寂寞如雪！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">玉笛愁吹心底事，秦楼喜遇梦中人。——颈联承接前句愁，后句转喜且破题，给人以心情豁然开朗之感！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">春风微拂桃花面，月下相倾碧玉樽。——尾联转结打开全篇，意境唯美，令读者沉醉在如聆听“春江花月夜”片尾曲的美好、欢乐中。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">5.【七绝五首】多少沉江浮上来 文/井中月明</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">（1）七绝 荷塘</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">水面搭台错落间，红灯射影几流连。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">报名蛙跃争相上，欲组新歌合唱团。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"></span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered"><span style="font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【临屏浅析】文/三笑</span></span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">水面搭台错落间，红灯射影几流连。——搭台、错落，暗写荷花参差开放，用词新颖，在灯光照射下更是影动花娇令人流连忘返，貌似月明哥们夜间赏荷。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">报名蛙跃争相上，欲组新歌合唱团。——蛙鼓蛙跃拟人手法的运用读之活泼又可爱。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">（2）七绝 荷花 </span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">点点新红合绿裁，西山过雨芰荷开。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">蝶蜂放荡无拘束，都被花香诱过来。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">——这一首自然流畅，转结蝶蜂放荡无拘束，都被花香诱过来。运用自由之笔来衬托芰荷的美丽与芳香。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">（3）七绝 咏荷</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">窈窕身形粉面羞，随风摇摆绿裙柔。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">高洁姿态常夸赞，暗把污浊藏下头。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">——1.2句拟人的手法，写的美妙如处子，结句感觉要是写暗把污浊濯去的意境就更好了，个建。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">（4）七绝 也题端午节</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">手里嘀嘀微信开，小长假日倍舒怀。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">红包比粽更经验，多少沉江浮上来。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">——自然明快！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">（5）七绝 题络红集出书</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">万里惊鸿寄到家，庭前翻阅屡相夸。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">清风亦爱诗中句，但赠书签是落花。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">——写出了收到络红集书的喜爱之情。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">6.【七绝•拟咏榴花】文/振衣千仞雪 </span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">五月榴开妃子笑，三春过后独葱茏。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">不疑木杪生团火，恰似佳人口上彤。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【临屏浅析】文/三笑</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">五月榴开妃子笑，——形象，落笔就给读者带来美感！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">三春过后独葱茏。——用我的咏榴花尾联来评价承接句感觉很恰当“何必叹春花事去，我言榴月胜春朝。”</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">不疑木杪生团火，——用肯定的语句来形容榴花绽放如火团，恰当！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">恰似佳人口上彤。——进一步形容榴花开放的状态，口上彤给人以热烈之感！</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">7.【翻赋《诗经》意之东门之杨 [五律]】 文/浮萍一梦</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【诗经·国风·陈风·东门之杨】</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">东门之杨，其叶牂牂①。昏以为期②，明星煌煌③。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">东门之杨，其叶肺肺④。昏以为期，明星晢晢⑤。 </span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">词句注释</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">①牂（zāng）牂：风吹树叶的响声。一说枝叶茂盛的样子。②昏：黄昏。期：约定的时间。③明星：明亮的星星。一说启明星，晨见东方。煌煌：明亮的样子。④肺（pèi）肺：枝叶茂盛的样子。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">⑤晢（zhé）晢：明亮的样子。 </span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">白话译文</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">我依偎着东城门外小白杨，浓密叶片辉映着金色夕阳。约好黄昏时相会在老地方，却让我苦等到明星闪闪亮。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">我来到东城门外白**边，晚霞映红了白杨浓密叶片。明明和人家约好黄昏见面，却让我苦等到星星嵌满天。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【五律】</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">斜晖染白杨，相约在林旁。碧水含情默，芳心似鹿狂。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">沙沙风过叶，淡淡月生凉。不见情郎影，晨星闪冷光。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">【临屏浅析】文/三笑</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 16px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;"> 读明白了，是一首爱情诗，斜晖染白杨，相约在林旁。好！首联交代了时间、地点。碧水含情默,，芳心似鹿狂。心理活动描写的好。沙沙风过叶， 淡淡月生凉。暗写久候不见情郎影，心生凉意，好。 不见情郎影，晨星闪冷光。尾联转结感觉应该再婉约点更好，不当之处望姐姐海涵！交流中梦姐姐让俺给想个结句，俺就抛砖引玉写了一尾联：俟望阑珊尽，凭谁恨断肠。被梦姐姐采用。</span><p></p> 欣赏佳作。为你点赞。问好三笑老师。 问好三笑老师 分享三笑老师的精彩佳贴 期待欣赏三笑老师更多的精彩佳作 向三笑老师学习。 欣赏三笑老师好文采 谢谢亲们支持，一并问好！
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