【听风】二阕
<div style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 20px; text-align: center;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 22px;"><strong>【高阳台·听风】其一</strong></span></div><span data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-size: 22px; font-family: SimSun;"><div style="text-align: center;"><br data-filtered="filtered">文/三笑 </div></span><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-size: 22px; font-family: SimSun;"> <br data-filtered="filtered"> 青草凝晖，松林破雾，烟岚渐散南山。九曲回廊，荷塘娇影谁怜。鱼游叶底双鹅戏，又几声、空远泠然。渺纤云，天上悠悠，北望萦牵。 无端一抹相思绪，念小楼环翠，何故生寒。羁旅飘蓬，流光偷换经年。竹篁今始它山老，叹浮生、多少凭栏。更思量，故里当时，若梦丝弦。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 20px;"><span data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); 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font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 20px; text-align: center;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 22px;"><strong>【高阳台·听风】其二</strong></span></div><span data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-size: 22px; font-family: SimSun;"><div style="text-align: center;"><br data-filtered="filtered">文/三笑</div></span><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-size: 22px; font-family: SimSun;"><br data-filtered="filtered"> 杨柳浮烟，芰荷滴露，瑶塘曳影清疏。一棹连桡，惊飞几对游凫。渰云压近南岑岭，漫丛林、遏隐神庐。渐霏霏，弄竹声声，靃靃成珠。 回廊隅角听香处，见蜻蜓飞过，蝶戏清芙。藕岸层台，有渔翁钓池鱼。忽思徒有鱼情羡，叹千年、就菊倾壶。向松涛，耳洗灵泉，花落青芜。</span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 20px;"><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); 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font-size: 20px; text-align: center;"><strong><span style="font-size: 22px; font-family: SimSun;">绛雪生凉美玉——与姐姐及诗友同题：</span></strong></div><strong style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 20px;"><span style="font-size: 22px;"><br data-filtered="filtered"><div style="text-align: center;"><strong><img src="http://www.52shici.com/kindeditor/attached/image/20180713/20180713153623_40305.jpg" alt="" style="border: 0px; max-width: 840px;"></strong></div></span></strong><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 20px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"></span><br data-filtered="filtered" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 20px;"><strong style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: -apple-system, BlinkMacSystemFont, "Helvetica Neue", "PingFang SC", "Microsoft YaHei", "Source Han Sans SC", "Noto Sans CJK SC", "WenQuanYi Micro Hei", sans-serif; font-size: 20px;"><span style="font-size: 22px; font-family: SimSun;">高山雅士精彩雅和，高挂共赏！<br data-filtered="filtered"><img src="http://www.52shici.com/kindeditor/attached/image/20180715/20180715154106_53147.jpg" style="border: 0px; max-width: 840px;"></span></strong><p></p> <iframe frameborder="no" width="330" height="86" src="//music.163.com/outchain/player?type=2&id=412187897&auto=1&height=66"></iframe> 附，新难得糊涂点评：
更喜欢其一，细细读来，处处听风，拍拍含情，妙不可言。
青草凝晖，松林破雾，烟岚渐散南山。松林破雾、烟岗渐散南山，风来了
九曲回廊，荷塘娇影谁怜。娇影暗含风动，更可怜
鱼徊叶底双鹅戏，又几声、空远泠然。这几声，或鹅也，或风也，有风则传得远，故生空远泠然之感
渺纤云，天上悠悠，北望萦牵。纤云悠悠，有风在吹向北方，为下片相思伏笔。
无端一抹相思绪，念小楼环翠，何故生寒。无端一抹相思绪，过渡漂亮。此处风过已生寒，转萧瑟
羁旅飘蓬，流光偷换经年。飘蓬，还是有风。
竹篁今始它山老，叹浮生、多少凭栏。这拍风在哪里？
更思量，故里当时，若梦丝弦。收结再回到过去，若梦丝弦，如风如缕，词终而韵未了。 欣赏三笑老师佳作。为你点赞。 问好笑宝呗，欣赏你的精彩诗文 欣赏唯美的图图，品读精彩诗文，还有这么好听的歌曲，陶醉！点赞！ 一个诗意的季节，一杯香茗，
一缕墨香，一曲悠扬，
一幅唯美的画卷。感谢精彩分享，
中画有你相伴更精彩！遥祝夏安！ 欣赏三笑老师美图美文，我也是醉了。 <div class="quote"><blockquote><font size="2"><a href="forum.php?mod=redirect&goto=findpost&pid=1491379&ptid=209767" target="_blank"><font color="#999999">幽园馨兰 发表于 2018-7-24 19:15</font></a></font>
欣赏唯美的图图，品读精彩诗文，还有这么好听的歌曲，陶醉！点赞！</blockquote></div>
高阳台属于词中长调，一般开篇二句都对仗。还要注意层次和“一字领”句式。一并问好兰宝和亲们~~谢谢雅赏好评鼓励！
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