慈水轻摇小翠荷，蛙声次第不怨多。梦回，你再看看是不是“怨”字出律了~~清风悄过碧云堆，小叶绮衣未卷开。 ...
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href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">衣</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">未</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">卷</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">开</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">。</font></a> <br><span class="c-c60000">古：平平仄通仄平平 仄仄仄通仄通平 ◆开【上平十灰】</span><br><span class="c-cc6633">今：平通通通仄平平 仄通仄通仄仄平 ◆开【四开,ai,uai】</span><br> <a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">十</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">万</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">蛙</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">声</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">多</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">惹</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">笑</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">，</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">不</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">堪</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">夜</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">半</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">落</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">窗</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">台</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">。</font></a> <br><span class="c-c60000">古：仄仄平平平仄仄 通平仄仄仄平平 ◆台【上平四支】【上平十灰】</span><br><span class="c-cc6633">今：平仄平平平仄仄 通平仄仄仄平平 ◆台【四开,ai,uai】</span></p><p><span class="c-cc6633"><br></span></p><p><span class="c-cc6633"> <a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">慈</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">水</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">轻</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">摇</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">小</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">翠</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">荷</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">，</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">蛙</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">声</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">次</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">第</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">不</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">怨</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">多</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">。</font></a> <br><span class="c-c60000">古：平仄通通仄仄通 平平仄仄通通平 ◆多【下平五歌】</span><br><span class="c-cc6633">今：平仄平平仄仄通 平平仄仄通仄平 ◆多</span><br> <a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">霓</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">灯</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">晴</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">动</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">支</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">川</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">夜</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">，</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">三</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">二</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">娇</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">童</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">数</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">九</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">河</font></a><a class="wxhx" href="http://www.zhgc.com/pz/pz.asp#"><font color="#0066cc">。</font></a> <br><span class="c-c60000">古：通平平仄平平仄 通仄通平仄仄平 ◆河【下平五歌】</span><br><span class="c-cc6633">今：平平平仄平平仄 平仄平平仄仄平 ◆河【二波,o,e,uo】</span></span></p><p><span class="c-cc6633"><span class="c-cc6633"><br></span></span></p><p><span class="c-cc6633"><span class="c-cc6633">一三五不论，应该没问题！</span></span></p> 多谢各位！夏祺！ 梦回青河 发表于 2018-5-11 17:56
清风悄过碧云堆，小叶绮衣未卷开。 古：平平仄通仄平平 仄仄仄通仄通平 ◆开【上平十灰】今：平通 ...
七绝不是135都不论的，七绝有四种格式的格律;P135位子如果出律了还可拗救~~ 三笑 发表于 2018-5-11 21:14
七绝不是135都不论的，七绝有四种格式的格律135位子如果出律了还可拗救~~
不讨论了，各自保留！母亲节快乐！:handshake
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