八卦掌付 发表于 2016-3-10 14:09

五排 跟风一壶酒

<span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;">作者&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;八卦掌付</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="黑体"><font size="5">五排&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;跟风一壶酒</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font size="4" style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;">我有一壶酒，含虚与共闉。幽香闻四野，浓酽漫三秦。</font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font size="4" style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;">经久藏松下，文殊曝海滨。少为林佛果，多感稗官因。</font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font size="4" style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;">相聚麒麟子，时教凤阁人。举杯邀宝月，足以慰风尘。</font><p></p>

三笑 发表于 2016-3-13 19:05

这首排律对仗工稳，老道，跟风一壶酒，邀月几句诗.醉饮三千盏，足以慰风尘~~呵呵~~

八卦掌付 发表于 2016-3-13 19:40

三笑 发表于 2016-3-13 19:05
这首排律对仗工稳，老道，跟风一壶酒，邀月几句诗.醉饮三千盏，足以慰风尘~~呵呵~~

感谢鼓励，晚上好。遥握
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