游记二首(外楹联二副)
<img src="http://www.52shici.com/kindeditor/attached/image/20151012/20151012152326_27061.jpg" width="500" border="0"><div><br></div><div><img src="http://www.52shici.com/kindeditor/attached/image/20151012/20151012151641_18998.jpg" width="500" border="0"><br><p></p><div><br></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">【五律】</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">诗/三笑</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">烽火硝烟尽,红夷日夜休。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">袁旗城上舞,风骨世间留。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">青瓦幽幽诉,丹心寂寂囚。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">不知君可悔,誓为大明忧?</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">注:红夷,指红夷大炮。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">2015.10.08游兴城古城感赋!</span></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br></span></div></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><img src="http://www.52shici.com/kindeditor/attached/image/20151006/20151006165528_63943.jpg" width="500" border="0"><br></span></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br></span></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">【五律】(新韵)</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">诗/三笑</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">悠然杨树下,抬眼望枝端。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">笑语惊飞鸟,余霞映醉颜。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">牡丹园内静,芍药路边宽。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">掬一香泉水,清香落发肩。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">2015.10.04晚与老公</span><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;">兴城林院散步游玩</span><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">感赋,借韵张榜友律诗【背影】。</span></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br></span></div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">习对第七十期楹联擂台赛留念:<br><br>第一联:</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">上联:先生绿叶后生花,花开叶落(慕容子夫)</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">下联:旧梦红妆新梦泪,泪浸妆失(三笑)</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">注:新韵</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">第二联:</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">上联:本是无为无是本(三笑)</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">下联:居然自建自然居(夜郎泉韵)</p></div> 起得完整,联多神采,结有回护,雅诗正礼。 八卦掌付 发表于 2015-11-5 09:24起得完整,联多神采,结有回护,雅诗正礼。
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