游记二首（外楹联二副）
<img src="http://www.52shici.com/kindeditor/attached/image/20151012/20151012152326_27061.jpg" width="500" border="0"><div><br></div><div><img src="http://www.52shici.com/kindeditor/attached/image/20151012/20151012151641_18998.jpg" width="500" border="0"><br><p></p><div><br></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">【五律】</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">诗/三笑</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">烽火硝烟尽，红夷日夜休。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">袁旗城上舞，风骨世间留。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">青瓦幽幽诉，丹心寂寂囚。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">不知君可悔，誓为大明忧？</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">注：红夷，指红夷大炮。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">2015.10.08游兴城古城感赋！</span></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br></span></div></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><img src="http://www.52shici.com/kindeditor/attached/image/20151006/20151006165528_63943.jpg" width="500" border="0"><br></span></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br></span></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">【五律】（新韵）</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">诗/三笑</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">悠然杨树下，抬眼望枝端。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">笑语惊飞鸟，余霞映醉颜。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">牡丹园内静，芍药路边宽。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">掬一香泉水，清香落发肩。</span><br style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">2015.10.04晚与老公</span><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;">兴城林院散步游玩</span><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);">感赋，借韵张榜友律诗【背影】。</span></div><div><span style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px; background-color: rgb(242, 242, 242);"><br></span></div><div><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">习对第七十期楹联擂台赛留念：<br><br>第一联：</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">上联：先生绿叶后生花，花开叶落（慕容子夫）</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">下联：旧梦红妆新梦泪，泪浸妆失（三笑）</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">注：新韵</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">第二联：</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">上联：本是无为无是本（三笑）</p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; font-size: 16px; line-height: 28px;">下联：居然自建自然居（夜郎泉韵）</p></div> 起得完整，联多神采，结有回护，雅诗正礼。 八卦掌付 发表于 2015-11-5 09:24起得完整，联多神采，结有回护，雅诗正礼。
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