八卦掌付 发表于 2015-11-2 12:52

憶舊（仄韻）

<font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">憶舊（仄韻）</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">（八卦掌付）</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4"><br></font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">昔者記華年，井蛙天下小。&nbsp;</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">兩河無翳昏，一雨有遼繞。&nbsp;</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">求學極心傷，精工固輕矯。&nbsp;</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">曾傷赤壁輯，未懂二喬少。&nbsp;</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">我樂夢中雷，客愁帳外曉。&nbsp;</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">那知三月村，復此四維渺。&nbsp;</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">舊簡茲融融，古箏空擾擾。&nbsp;</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">手談皆善緣，神會去餘燎。&nbsp;</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">誰數星星多，童奚頁頁勦。&nbsp;</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="楷体, 楷体_GB2312"><font size="4">何由昨日羞，便可追靑鳥。</font></font><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><p></p>

三笑 发表于 2015-11-4 21:46

八卦斑斑的这首忆旧排律流畅、工稳，赏学了~~

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-11-5 07:21

三笑 发表于 2015-11-4 21:46
八卦斑斑的这首忆旧排律流畅、工稳，赏学了~~

感謝點評，早上好。、

天沐云浴 发表于 2015-11-12 20:29

哈哈哈，改日手谈一回;P

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-11-12 20:35

天沐云浴 发表于 2015-11-12 20:29
哈哈哈，改日手谈一回

好:lol:lol
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