八卦掌付 发表于 2015-10-28 10:55

口語入詩幾問

<div style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="新宋体" size="5" color="#000000"><b>近體詩詞,一定要回歸古漢語語境麽?弄一些晦澀難懂的典故,以及一些當下早已不用的古漢語方休?</b></font></div><div style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="新宋体" size="5" color="#000000"><b>我們看當下影視劇的歌詞,流暢、清新、傳播廣泛,是否可以借鑒一二?</b></font></div><div style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="新宋体" size="5" color="#000000"><b>我們看名作:<span style="line-height: 30px; background-color: rgb(229, 231, 231);">李绅的悯农诗:“四海无闲田,农夫尤饿死。”“谁知盆中餐,粒粒皆辛苦。”和王梵志的名句:“他人骑大马,我独跨驴子。回顾担柴汉,心头较些子。”這些明白曉暢的口語化作品,流傳了多少年?</span></b></font></div><div style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="新宋体" size="5" color="#000000"><b>口語如此現實,口語入詩何嘗不可?</b></font><p></p></div><div style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="新宋体" size="5" color="#000000"><b>有鑒於此,即興一個:<span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27.2000007629395px;">五律*感動千萬人的特别請假條</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: normal;">(八卦掌付)</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: normal;">離家多久了,想回去看看。</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: normal;">老屋何模樣,舊容孤客單。</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: normal;">鄉關無力倚,夢影有心難。</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: normal;">一紙當鴻雁,歸來相見歡。</span></b></font></div><div style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif;"><font face="新宋体" size="5" color="#000000"><b><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: normal;">再來一個:</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27.2000007629395px;">五律*沒悟透</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27.2000007629395px;">(八卦掌付)</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27.2000007629395px;">故鄉山野風,檐下酒酣翁。</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27.2000007629395px;">黷武倦黃菊,斯文棄紫穹。</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27.2000007629395px;">暮年官癮大,早歲道心矇。</span><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27.2000007629395px;">晚景無端好,幾多為爾紅?</span></b></font></div><div><font face="新宋体" size="5" color="#000000"><b><span style="letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27.2000007629395px;"><br></span></b></font></div><p></p>
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