八卦掌付 发表于 2015-9-10 11:19

莺啼序*秋风乱画扇

本帖最后由 八卦掌付 于 2015-9-10 20:16 编辑 <br /><br /><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">莺啼序*秋风乱画扇（八卦掌付作品）</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">三秋似稍早到，叹春光翻转。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">落叶被，乱舞缤纷，恍如新韵吟浅。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">年年晚、今年却早，期遭厄尔尼尼暖？</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">看文辞无量，怎愁思一千剪！</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">生活无情，艰辛渡过，不再留缱绻。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">旧时月，江北江东，白天熬到夜晚。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">点沉香、殚精竭虑，且偷乐、红尘为伴。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">笑苍生，豪迈几时，半樓祈愿。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">瘦琶肥藕，对酒吟诗，仗剑寻疾缓。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">梦倩影、梦倩影也，淀上清荷，竹韵悠悠，后唐遗怨。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">来宽慰佛，来宽慰道，知君何事声声纵，大河中、经殿香风偃。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">魂消两处，误心期到商弦。尽是奇卉争绽。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">浩然宇宙，灿烂群星，听曲调温婉。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">睹宫物、斜阳正传，意在天涯，回首长空，西城已远。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">巍巍泰岳，弯弯河洛，盈盈热泪奉东海，数相思、袅袅吴宫阪。相思相望相亲，天为谁春？</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;">此情常恋。</span><br style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><p></p><div><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 24px;"><br></span></div><div><span style="font-family: Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; line-height: 25.6000003814697px; background-color: rgb(249, 249, 249);">（二叠3句首，三叠倒数4句首领字突破旧有，标新立异。呵呵）</span></div>

独行剑客 发表于 2015-9-10 15:00

美不胜收
谢谢分享

独行剑客 发表于 2015-9-10 15:01

谢谢老师的精彩分享！期待你下一个精彩！

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-9-10 15:05

独行剑客 发表于 2015-9-10 15:00
美不胜收
谢谢分享

谢谢，下午好。

三笑 发表于 2015-9-11 08:39

八卦斑斑这阕长调意境营造的唯美，语句流畅且有创新，比以前填的词要好，精华共赏！问好！

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-9-11 08:39

三笑 发表于 2015-9-11 08:39
八卦斑斑这阕长调意境营造的唯美，语句流畅且有创新，比以前填的词要好，精华共赏！问好！

感谢鼓励，上午好。:handshake
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