学律杂谈
本帖最后由 八卦掌付 于 2015-8-12 11:03 编辑 <br /><br /><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000">跌跌撞撞的学习律诗好多年了，至今不敢说很精通。</font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font color="#000000"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"> 一首律诗，重点要</font></font><font size="3"> </font><font face="黑体"><font size="4">有主旨，你要传达一个什么样的信息？读诗的人读来，是否能够有所共鸣？我自己觉得这个才是最大的意义所在。</font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> 其次，律诗应该有章法。首尾二联犹如表里，由表及里，得有精气神，有嚼头，有劲道。颌联、颈联犹如仪仗队，得有威仪。合起来，就好比一支军队，有军纪军法约束。律诗的军法就是押韵、平仄、对仗、粘对、拗救等，尽量不要出现孤平和三平调等。</font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> 我的做法一般就是用今音方言写草稿，反复读，边读边修改，最后用古音对比，最后惊奇的发现，湖北方言很大程度上与平水韵同步，少量修改即可。</font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> 古人说：“诗言志”。这个说法太对了，一首诗，别人看不出作者表达什么，其本身就是失败。</font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> </font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> 写诗无非是寄托、排遣、比兴、娱乐一下，不要有写出好诗的想法，真情实感就好。</font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> 若果都是好诗，唐诗早已不存在了，今人很难达到那个高度了。</font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"><br></font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> 标准格式与变体的争论非常有趣：</font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> 有的人按四种标准格式写诗，偶尔写出有意味的作品，有的人喜欢标新立异，研究拗体，二者都可，个人爱好不同而已。下面以事论事，一笑：</font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="left" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> </font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><div align="center" style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font face="黑体"><font size="4"><font color="#000000"> </font></font></font></font></font></div><br style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px;"><font style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><font face="Simsun"><font style="font-size: 14px;"><div align="center">一</div><br></font></font></font></font></font></font><font style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><font face="Simsun"><font style="font-size: 14px;"><div align="center">格律诗中去仄明，佩文古韵待澄清。一三五句无编驳？孤弱欺声错不轻。</div><br><div align="center">二</div><br><div align="center">小拗诗言岂不闻，大纲六仄下消平。仄平韵脚安奇字，本上孤文拗救清。</div><br><div align="center">三</div><br><div align="center">世俗常将诗韵唱，都和律句悖相行。辉煌唐宋当称璨，友客明知个中情？</div><br><div align="center">四</div><br><div align="center">悠悠清律不能说，煌论而论在眼前。世俗迷于依本写，哪留臻境再生焉？</div><br><div align="center">五</div><br><div align="center">两岸柔丝任意裁，几枝素卉悄然开。不闻香染千年路， 缘是诗家踏浪来。</div><br></font></font></font></font></font></font><font style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><font face="Simsun"><font style="font-size: 14px;"><div align="center">六</div><br><div align="center">秋藤春叶幻红尘，竟似花瓶未换新。诗道颓迷悲切切，谁知唐宋更传神？</div><br><div align="center">七</div><br></font></font></font></font></font></font><font style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><font face="Simsun"><font style="font-size: 14px;"><div align="center">新人不识妙文章，巧嵌丽辞巧画妆。孰若善调真假味，夺魁精髓寂然香。</div><br><div align="center">八</div><br></font></font></font></font></font></font><font style="font-family: Tahoma, 'Microsoft Yahei', Simsun; font-size: 15px; line-height: 22.5px; color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><font style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><font face="Simsun"><font style="font-size: 14px;"><div align="center">昨夜诗坛寻美玉，太多芜杂入吾眸。随风拼凑无平仄，谁肯精攻韵外求？</div><br><div align="center">九</div><br><div align="center"><font style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68);"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;">金刹央央梦境游，无边美景为诗留。唐尧余韵应还在，秦晋逸风飞重楼。</font></font></font></font><br><font style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68);"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;">家落秋蜩奏悲调，人勤春早善筹谋。待沽闲暇舀清酒，中乂陵前看影浮。</font></font></font></font><br></div><div align="center"><font style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68);"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><br></font></font></font></font></div><div align="center"><font style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68);"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;">十</font></font></font></font></div><div align="center"><font style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68);"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif"><font style="font-size: 16px;"><br></font></font></font></font></div><div align="center"><font color="#444444"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif">故纸堆豗得蕣华，脱胎现实叹赪霞。</font></font></font><font color="#444444"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif">诗词乏味浑惊顾，文彩多姿诘倨牙。</font></font></font><br><font color="#444444"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif">舌鳎豪牛忧地远，口糜肥羜悯天涯。</font></font></font><font color="#444444"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><font face="Tahoma, Helvetica, SimSun, sans-serif">装腔作势听箫笛，月下孤吟渡小艖。</font></font></font><br></div><br><div align="center">十一</div><br><div align="center"><font color="#212121">且就山泉仰一壶，书囊作伴不曾孤。云烟缥缈神仙恨，水影虚盈俗世途。</font><br><font color="#212121">熠熠古槎松下照，茫茫新月叶中呜。遥知李杜当年惑，都是冲天大丈夫。</font></div></font></font></font></font></font></font><p></p> 精彩，感谢分享 zjccrn 发表于 2015-8-12 11:45精彩，感谢分享
新人不识妙文章，巧嵌丽辞巧画妆。孰若善调真假味，夺魁精髓寂然香。
zjccrn 发表于 2015-8-12 11:45
精彩，感谢分享
新人不识妙文章，巧嵌丽辞巧画妆。孰若善调真假味，夺魁精髓寂然香。
:lol谢谢了。
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