八卦掌付 发表于 2015-7-14 16:41

八论诗词

<span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; line-height: 22.3999996185303px; background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">《八论诗词》</span><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; line-height: 22.3999996185303px; background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">&nbsp;（八卦掌付）&nbsp;</span></span><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; line-height: 22.3999996185303px; background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><br></span></span></span><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; line-height: 22.3999996185303px; background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><strong>一&nbsp;</strong></span><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; line-height: 22.3999996185303px; background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><strong><br><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">格律诗中去仄明，佩文古韵待澄清。</span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">一三五句无编驳？孤弱欺声错不轻。</span><br><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">二</span><br><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">小拗诗言岂不闻，大纲六仄下消平。</span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">仄平韵脚安奇字，本上孤文拗救清。</span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">&nbsp;</span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><br></span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">三</span><br><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">世俗常将诗韵唱，都和律句悖相行。</span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">辉煌唐宋当称璨，友客明知个中情？</span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">&nbsp;</span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><br></span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">四</span><br><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">悠悠清律不能说，煌论而论在眼前。世俗迷于依本写，哪留臻境再生焉？</span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">&nbsp;</span><br><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">五<br></span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">两岸柔丝任意裁，几枝素卉悄然开。</span><span style="background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);">不闻香染千年路， 缘是诗家踏浪来。</span><br></strong></span></span><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; line-height: 22.3999996185303px; background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><strong>六</strong><br><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><strong>秋藤春叶幻红尘，竟似花瓶未换新。</strong></span><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><strong>诗道颓迷悲切切，谁知唐宋更传神？</strong></span><br><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><strong>七</strong></span><br></span><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; line-height: 22.3999996185303px; background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><strong>新人不识妙文章，巧嵌丽辞巧画妆。孰若善调真假味，夺魁精髓寂然香。</strong></span><br><strong>八</strong><br></span><span style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-family: Simsun; line-height: 22.3999996185303px; background-color: rgb(246, 246, 246);"><strong>昨夜诗坛寻美玉，太多芜杂入吾眸。随风拼凑无平仄，谁肯精攻韵外求？<br></strong></span><p></p>

梦回青河 发表于 2015-7-17 06:20

欣赏佳韵，问好八版！

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-7-17 06:27

梦回青河 发表于 2015-7-17 06:20
欣赏佳韵，问好八版！

早上好，:victory:

三笑 发表于 2015-7-18 14:11

有感而发的八论诗词绝句，经验之谈且写作手法娴熟！赏学了，问好！

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-7-18 14:28

三笑 发表于 2015-7-18 14:11
有感而发的八论诗词绝句，经验之谈且写作手法娴熟！赏学了，问好！

感谢点评与鼓励，下午好。
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