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三笑发表于 2015-6-13 18:30

【五律•叠韵四章】

<p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 102, 0);"><strong>【五律•叠韵四章】</strong></span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 102, 0);"><strong>次</strong></span><span style="font-family: 楷体_GB2312; font-size: 18px; color: rgb(0, 102, 0);"><strong>韵了凡童鞋</strong></span><span style="font-family: 楷体_GB2312; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;">       </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;">       诗</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"><span style="font-size: 18px;">/</span><span style="font-size: 18px;">三笑</span></span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;"><br></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;">         一    </span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">碧水连天色，崖州倩影留。 </span><br><span style="font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">林中曾执手，海上共盟鸥。</span><br><span style="font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">梦别长天雁，心凝小叶舟。 </span><br><span style="font-size: 18px; font-family: SimSun;">相思随浪舞，千朵汇成愁。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun;">          </span><br><span style="font-family: SimSun;">         </span></span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun;">二</span><br><span style="font-family: SimSun;">梦里乡思苦，湿痕枕上留。 </span><br><span style="font-family: SimSun;">醒时吟旧句，醉后忆沙鸥。 </span><br><span style="font-family: SimSun;">脉脉风中泪，蒙蒙浪里舟。</span><br><span style="font-family: SimSun;">几时能载负，款款一江愁。</span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;"></span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">          </span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">三</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">横笛乡思又，乡思渡口留。 </span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">天边寻一影，眸底掠孤鸥。 </span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">怎个悲凉味，那些寂寞舟。 </span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">何时归故里，此念绾成愁。</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">          </span><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">四</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">人生如雁过，一瞬也名留。 </span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">我是红尘客，君非碧海鸥。 </span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun; font-size: 18px;">骤风能共雨，逆水可同舟。 </span><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 10.5pt;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun;">信念时时有，谁言刻刻愁。</span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="font-family: 宋体; font-size: 18px;"><span style="font-family: SimSun;"><br></span></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 102, 0); font-size: 18px;"><strong>了凡童鞋原玉嵌入鼠绘动画中：</strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 102, 0); font-size: 18px;"><strong><br></strong></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="color: rgb(33, 33, 33); font-family: 'Microsoft YaHei', sans-serif; font-size: 16px; letter-spacing: 1px; line-height: 27px;"><span style="color: rgb(0, 102, 0); font-size: 18px;"><strong>http://www.52shici.com/kindeditor/attached/flash/20150613/20150613172554_41929.swf<br></strong></span></p><p></p>

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-6-13 18:32

意境优美，音韵悠扬

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-6-13 18:46

诗文隽永，遣意由衷~，大赞！！

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-6-13 18:47

怎个悲凉味，那些寂寞舟。这么敞亮的沧桑啊？呵呵~~~

三笑发表于 2015-6-13 19:12

八卦掌付发表于 2015-6-13 18:47
怎个悲凉味，那些寂寞舟。这么敞亮的沧桑啊？呵呵~~~

这是看了了凡童鞋的一组思乡佳作而写，俺很少写伤感滴东东~~谢谢八卦斑斑大力支持！

应笑我 发表于 2015-6-18 16:43

相思随浪舞，千朵汇成愁。美女言愁，别有一番滋味在心头。笑笑此组律诗写的太好了。

三笑发表于 2015-6-18 19:07

应笑我发表于 2015-6-18 16:43
相思随浪舞，千朵汇成愁。美女言愁，别有一番滋味在心头。笑笑此组律诗写的太好了。

临屏唱和，兄长过奖了~~谢谢兄长好评鼓励哦！问好！:handshake

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