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三笑发表于 2015-5-5 15:19

舟行渐有声（五绝、七律）

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<P><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">背景音乐：渔樵问答</SPAN><BR></P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #e53333; FONT-SIZE: 18px"><STRONG><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">【五绝•题图】</SPAN></STRONG></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><BR><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px"></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">诗</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">/</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">三笑</SPAN><SPAN></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">一湖波浪静，岸上柳丝轻。</SPAN><SPAN></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">放眼心飞远，舟行渐有声。</SPAN><SPAN></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">——次韵酒兄、唱和幽兰姐姐</SPAN><SPAN></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; COLOR: #e53333; FONT-SIZE: 18px"><STRONG>【七律·贺珠江月诗社成立】</STRONG></SPAN><SPAN></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">诗</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">/</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">三笑</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">花城四月不寻常，瀛阆诗仙聚一堂。①</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">吟得雅风传古韵，别开蹊径唱钟黄。</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">西江月挽珠江月，南乐章连北乐章。②</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">幸有五羊持谷穗，他时翰苑溢秋香。③</SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">①花城，广州市的别称。</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">②学用了凡童鞋【七律·贺珠江月诗社成立】颔联句。</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">最是羊城四月中，书香雅韵喜相融。</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">西江月共珠江月，南国风连北国风。</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">词赋千章天地永，诗心一点古今通。</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">謫仙有梦堪传递，雏凤初鸣震碧空。</SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 18px">③五羊，广州的代名词，民间有五仙骑羊手持谷穗而降的传说，这里指西江月公司赴粤参加珠江月诗社成立盛会的五人：了凡、站长、阿里、笛子、阿东。俺这句也泛指**各界支持珠江月诗社的友人。</SPAN></P>

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-5-5 16:53

首赏学习，绝妙好句！

八卦掌付 发表于 2015-5-5 16:53

佳作，加亮了。

应笑我 发表于 2015-5-6 08:43

五绝七律俱佳，鼠绘配乐高雅。笑笑真才女也。

龙◆卷◆风 发表于 2015-5-6 10:09

欣赏三笑管管精美诗文葱白

梦回青河 发表于 2015-5-14 06:34

古朴，悠远！问好！

远走他乡 发表于 2015-5-16 23:39

应景的痕迹稍重了些.

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