三笑 发表于 2015-2-7 16:44

乡思、弦音、探春

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<P><STRONG><FONT size=4><FONT color=#e53333><FONT face=宋体>【绝句五十六法】<SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN></FONT></FONT></FONT></STRONG> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold">第一法:</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-WEIGHT: bold"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">四句旋转而下,第四句有一二字与第一、二句相复者,前句重复字词多实写,第四句重复字词虚实结合是对实写进一步提升。而句首并多用“却”字。凡绝句,三四句必紧接,而与第一、二句却多不即不离,以转捩关键,全在第三句也。惟此类,则第四句必与第一、二句呼应极紧,盖四句一气转下者也。如唐贾岛《渡桑乾》“客舍并州已十霜,归心日夜忆咸阳。无端更渡桑乾水,却望并州是故乡”;李商隐《夜雨寄北》:“君问归期未有期,巴山夜雨涨秋池。何当共剪西窗烛,却话巴山夜雨时”。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">【</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">七绝</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">·</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">乡思</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">】绝句五十六法第</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">1</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">法</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">诗</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">/</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">三笑</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">夤夜相思月上楼,家山远水又深秋。&nbsp;</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">难敌病酒杯中底,却</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">惹相思不尽</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">愁。&nbsp;</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">(新韵)</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">第</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold">二</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px; FONT-WEIGHT: bold">法:</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-WEIGHT: bold"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">或四句,或三句,与第一、二句俱有相复之字,而与前一法稍异。意在突出主题,每一个相同的字跟别的字关联后意义又不尽相同。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">如宋王安石《游钟山》“终日看山不厌山,买山终待老山闲。山花落尽山长在,山水空流山自闲”;明僧德祥《爱闲》:“一生心事只求闲,求得闲来鬓已斑。更欲破除闲耳目,要听流水要看山”;清江湜《舟中二绝》(其一):“浮生已是一孤舟,更被孤舟载出游。却羡舟人挟妻子,家于舟上去无愁”。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">【</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">七绝</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">·</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">弦音</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">】绝句五十六法第</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">2</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">法</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">诗</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">/</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">三笑</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">抚弦几度念东风,半忆弦歌半忆松。&nbsp;</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">月下清弦思绪远,觞弦尤似梦弦中。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">(新韵)</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-WEIGHT: bold"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">第三法:</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-WEIGHT: bold"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">第三、</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">四两句,轱辘而下,故第四句必有一二字与第三句相复,而又用“还”、“又”&nbsp;“更”等字以紧系之,而第三句或先用“已”字以启其意。如宋李遘《绝句》:“人言落日是天涯,望极天涯不见家。已恨碧山相掩映,碧山还被暮云遮”;明姚汝循《回雁峰》:“回雁峰头望帝京,寒云黯黯不胜情。贾生已道长沙远,今过长沙又几程”。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><BR><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">【</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">七绝</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">·</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">探春</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">】绝句五十六法第</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">3</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">法</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
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<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">诗</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">/</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 18px">三笑</SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">误入瑶林忘我开,春风摇曳踏香来。&nbsp;</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>
<P class=MsoNormal><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 18px">闲情吟得桃花醉,又似桃花落两腮。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt"></SPAN> </P>

三笑 发表于 2015-2-7 17:27

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铁蛋 发表于 2015-2-7 19:16

醉入词林眼难开
醺风暗送墨香来
佳人闲摘桃花醉
恰似桃花映笑腮

呵呵,铁蛋醉和三笑桃花醉

大鹏 发表于 2015-2-7 19:51

哇,厉害哈。慢慢欣赏。

三笑 发表于 2015-2-7 19:56

铁蛋 发表于 2015-2-7 19:16
醉入词林眼难开
醺风暗送墨香来
佳人闲摘桃花醉


:lol唱的好,俺都醉了,呵呵~~久违了铁蛋老友!还好吧?今天咋这么有闲情呢,呵呵~~看到你很开心,问好!:handshake

三笑 发表于 2015-2-7 19:56

大鹏 发表于 2015-2-7 19:51
哇,厉害哈。慢慢欣赏。

大鹏来了,谢谢大力支持哦~~:handshake

啊英 发表于 2015-2-8 02:18

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三笑 发表于 2015-2-8 08:14

啊英 发表于 2015-2-8 02:18
三笑老师真棒,诗情画意,图文并茂,学习了!

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独行剑客 发表于 2015-2-8 10:49

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独行剑客 发表于 2015-2-8 10:54

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