三笑 发表于 2014-7-11 17:13

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随风而行 发表于 2014-7-11 23:28

东,冬,挤韵啦。。。

三笑 发表于 2014-7-12 07:40

随风而行 发表于 2014-7-11 23:28
东,冬,挤韵啦。。。

问好随风友友!东风是常用词组,读着顺,俺个人认为在这句不用介意挤韵~~谢谢友友细赏~~敬早茶!

清音王梓 发表于 2014-7-12 16:31

路过支持,押韵、平仄之类的完全不懂,

三笑 发表于 2014-7-13 08:38

清音王梓 发表于 2014-7-12 16:31
路过支持,押韵、平仄之类的完全不懂,

:lol弟弟完全能看懂诗的意境,呵呵~~其实只要能读能懂俺写的是什么意思就行了~~不能懂那么多,累

一抹海蓝 发表于 2014-7-14 12:28

支持仙姐姐

三笑 发表于 2014-7-17 21:19

一抹海蓝 发表于 2014-7-14 12:28
支持仙姐姐

:hug:问好仙妹妹~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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