浅析道边先生的七律.邯郸寻旧
<FONT face=Simsun><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 22px"><P class=works-intro>序：上世纪八十年代初，曾在邯郸求学四载。难忘那段时空里的天和地、人和事。</P></SPAN></FONT>
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<P style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" class=MsoNormal align=center><FONT face=Simsun><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 22px">七律.邯郸寻旧</SPAN></FONT></P>
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<P style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" class=MsoNormal align=center><FONT face=Simsun><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 22px">桃花风里一头秋，已去时空枉觅求。</SPAN><SPAN></SPAN></FONT> </P>
<P style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" class=MsoNormal align=center><FONT face=Simsun><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 22px">行处重行行不是，意边着意意无休。</SPAN><SPAN></SPAN></FONT> </P>
<P style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" class=MsoNormal align=center><FONT face=Simsun><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; FONT-SIZE: 22px">可怜身命为心使，堪叹华光逐梦流。</SPAN><SPAN></SPAN></FONT> </P>
<P style="TEXT-ALIGN: center" class=MsoNormal align=center><SPAN style="FONT-SIZE: 22px"><FONT face=Simsun><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: SimSun">卅载收成尘满面，丛台四望更重楼。</SPAN><BR></P></FONT></SPAN>
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<DIV style="TEXT-ALIGN: left"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: KaiTi_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 20px">丛台：赵武灵王</SPAN><SPAN style="LINE-HEIGHT: 24px; BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff; FONT-FAMILY: KaiTi_GB2312; COLOR: #333333; FONT-SIZE: 20px">检阅军队与观赏歌舞之地，古称"武灵丛台"。</SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: 'sans serif', tahoma, verdana, helvetica; FONT-SIZE: 20px"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: KaiTi_GB2312; FONT-SIZE: 20px">是</SPAN><SPAN style="LINE-HEIGHT: 24px; BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff; FONT-FAMILY: KaiTi_GB2312; COLOR: #333333; FONT-SIZE: 20px">古城</SPAN><SPAN style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff; FONT-FAMILY: KaiTi_GB2312; COLOR: #333333; FONT-SIZE: 20px">邯郸</SPAN><SPAN style="LINE-HEIGHT: 24px; BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff; FONT-FAMILY: KaiTi_GB2312; COLOR: #333333; FONT-SIZE: 20px">的象征，中国百家名园之一。</SPAN></SPAN></DIV>
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<P class=works-intro>三笑浅析：</P>
<P sizset="2" sizcache="1"><SPAN class=icon_top title=此评论被作者置顶></SPAN><A class="setTop f12" href="javascript:void(0)" jQuery1404806241781="33" str="msg_owner_id=10036&works_id=464848&works_h1=邯郸寻旧&cm_id=2769882"></A>桃花风里一头秋，已去时空枉觅求。——落笔一种美好伴一声叹息至耳旁。<BR><BR>行处重行行不是，意边着意意无休。—— 叠字的巧妙应用，意境层层递进，深邃，令读者沉思。<BR><BR>可怜身命为心使，堪叹华光逐梦流。——可怜，堪叹一种伤感油然而生。 <BR><BR>卅载收成尘满面，丛台四望更重楼。——沧桑历尽，有淡看世事之意，又有沧桑过后更沧桑之意。<BR><BR>浅析一下先生的佳律，先生写的诗词每一首都耐品，细品能学到很多东西。</P>
<P class=works-intro> </SPAN></SPAN> </P></DIV> 欣赏笑宝的精彩 紫色依恋 发表于 2014-7-8 21:28
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