刘挚仙 发表于 2014-2-21 22:39

【仙人文集】梦游仙

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"><font size="5"><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">梦游仙</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">&nbsp;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: 宋体; color: black;"><br>
</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">梦游仙，潇飒居住众山巅。农耕田园，举笔挥</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">荡</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">，赋平篇，</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">翩翩</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">，赏荷莲，闲时墨画描婵娟，春来品茗茶苑，绘写文翚与禅联。短作辞说，长歌词叙。古今美著佳</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">筵</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">，悦河川秀色，如醉如楚，如饮甘泉。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;"><o:p></o:p></span></font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"><font size="5"><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">其日，</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">履下移迁，挥洒论处，听风雨嫣</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">旃</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">，花开盛，胭脂红润，绿草</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">欢璇</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">，心愉焉，阅浏赏柳友缘，玫瑰正放蕾嫣，历留是地，停步浏漓，景貌妖艳襟</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">搴</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">。<span lang="EN-US"><o:p></o:p></span></span></font></p>

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"><font size="5"><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">四月桃花梵，相思豆种，美娘娇嫣。涧上留芳绘影，苑中春色秀绣</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">骞膻</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">。仙家忘了归山，雨塘莲藕，结芯苗头在。雷震阴郁画长空响，轰烔烔、划过山悬，阵阵风、越了林</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">渊</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;">。远方江海入口渔船，顶波捞捕。鸥翔浪郜。盛世田</span><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red; background-color: rgb(249, 238, 218); background-position: initial initial; background-repeat: initial initial;">阡</span></font><span style="font-family: 宋体; color: red;"><font size="5">。</font><span lang="EN-US" style="font-size: 15pt;"><o:p></o:p></span></span></p><p></p>

三笑 发表于 2014-2-22 10:21

长调不好写，仙人的梦游仙意境很美，只是感觉个别字应该再精炼些就更完美了~赏学了~问好！

刘挚仙 发表于 2014-2-22 13:44

三笑 发表于 2014-2-22 10:21
长调不好写，仙人的梦游仙意境很美，只是感觉个别字应该再精炼些就更完美了~赏学了~问好！

谢谢三笑临贴品点，谢谢

一抹海蓝 发表于 2014-2-22 18:32

好美的场景，读仙人的文字，让人心旷神怡{:soso_e179:}

刘挚仙 发表于 2014-2-22 21:40

一抹海蓝 发表于 2014-2-22 18:32
好美的场景，读仙人的文字，让人心旷神怡

哈哈哈，哈哈哈，谢谢海蓝临贴欣赏，谢谢
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